Showing posts with label Menahat itself. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Menahat itself. Show all posts

Friday, August 29, 2025

Spectrobes: Origins - Menahat's off-screen scenes and other things #4

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NOTES: Not that this one took a while to write, it's more like I left it for a while because I was going through a terrible creative block. I actually had a majority of the chapter written down before I left it, so now that I've continued it, it didn't take too long until I was happy with it.


Chapter 4

He-e-e-elp…

        “Huh?”
        Zig looked to the East.

Somebo-o-ody… 

        “Whuzzat noise?”
        He loosened his grip on his shovel.

Ple-e-ea-a-ase…

Zig was one of three men; the first to notice the peculiar cries over the sounds of shoveling that dominated the air. Suddenly, the shoveling died and the remaining two would turn their heads towards the cries, as well.

“Oh, I dunno,” Gorrik replied. 
“Is that a ghost? Creepy!”

Beht shook his head doubtfully, “Sounds like a man crying inconsolably.”

Then, Gorrik, to Beht’s answer, “Like real? Or a ghost?” 

Beht tried to ignore him. 

It was most likely the weeping that they all heard came from a very real and very distraught man, but the trio had already been out in vast isolation for (what felt like to them) so long – isolation long enough for them to wonder whether or not the weeping was really there. In the end, the three men concluded that the cries may as well be real, after all.

“Ah man….” A sour tinge of guilt poked at Zig.
“I don’t think I ever faced a time where I’d end up feelin’ like that. It’s already rough as it can get out here.” 

Beht and Gorrik shared with him the same sentiment.

“If there really is a man lost out there, then we gotta find him! Help the poor feller out!” Gorrik suggested.

Zig nodded enthusiastically. “Let’s go, then!”

The three men picked up their shovels, then it was towards the noise they went. 

“You know, Gorrik, at the same time, that whole ghost thing you mentioned could be true as well,” Beht commented.
“I mean, this whole planet is a giant graveyard if you think about it.”

“Whaddaya mean?” 
Gorrik turned his head, to which Beht noticed. He noticed Zig do so too, both his younger brothers looking at him as if they had no clue about what he had just said. But then he remembered that Zig and Gorrik weren’t exactly well-read, or interested in reading at all, and decided that he didn’t want to waste his time spelling out to them the history of Menahat for the rest of the day. He sighed.

“Anyways, Zig,” Beht began.
“You don’t think the boss is going to find out we’ve gone off track, do you? This might take a while.”

“Now that ya say it…”
“Hmm…”
Zig thought for a moment.
“From how the fella sounds, how long d’you think he’s got left?”

Beht tried to remember the sound of the weeping.
“He’s dehydrated, for sure, but he might still have some life in him.”

Zig thought some more.

“No harm in just heading on over there, if you ask me!” Gorrik interrupted.
“We can even work there! Who knows? Might have what we’re looking for?”

The annoyed look on Zig’s face immediately disappeared. 

“Ah! That’s right – the ruins! Let’s go faster!” Zig agreed, and the three of them picked up the pace.


No matter where he walked, Gorrik never looked straight ahead. Even if he tried, he’d only last at most thirty seconds. It never mattered how tight or populated a place was – whether or not he was in a bustling business district or whenever he would go out clubbing or raving (as he often did, particularly in his early twenties), he’d constantly bump into people and objects,  knocking things down from small glasses to tall, heavy shelves. It was always that Gorrik found something that grabbed his attention in one way or another. Here in the desert, he saw a lone cactus. He saw the sand and the way that the sunlight glittered on its many grains. He saw shapes in the sky; a few of them, some of Menahat’s many moons. And then he noticed the clouds, how they were so thin and scattered. 
Suddenly, there shone a foreign dot, a bright dot which dragged behind it a glowing trail. Gorrik caught sight of that, too.
“Did I just see a shooting star? A meteor? In the day?!” 

Zig and Beht exclaimed with surprise, wondering how that kind of thing would be even possible. 

“Are you sure? That’s an incredibly rare occurrence,” commented Beht.

Gorrik flinched in astonishment.
“It’s rare?! Like, how rare?”

“Crazy rare.”

Gorrik observed the dot more closely. It was still in the sky! Then whatever the dot was, it was no shooting star.

“It’s gettin’ closer!” noticed Zig.
“That a UFO or somethin’?”

“Technically, you’re right…” reaffirmed Beht. But, even being the most knowledgeable of the three, Beht admitted he had never seen such a thing before. 

“Straight outta fiction, ain’t it?”

“Absolutely. ”

“This could be huge! Crazy!”

The three curious men continued to marvel  at the mysterious object in the sky until it finally disappeared behind the mesas ahead.

Gorrik turned immediately to his two older brothers. 
“Oh man, we gotta see what it is! We gotta check it out!”

In the direction of the dot’s descent, Zig went.
“Well, let’s go!”

Then, Gorrik exclaimed in excitement and was soon jogging behind him.

Finally, followed Beht at the back. For the last time, he glanced at the direction of the weeping man. “Are we just going to forget…”
But, he saw Zig and Gorrik were already far ahead of him.
“Tsk, never mind. Maybe we can just come back later.”


NOTES: I know I like to headcanon Zig, Beht & Gorrik as half-brothers, but I don't know how explicitly I should mention that detail in the story. But then I thought to myself, "oh well, it's not like enough people give a crap anyway," so I just went ahead and mentioned the word 'brother' a few times here and there. I decided not to spill out too many details about their familial relationship and keep it more story-focused, as accurate to canon as possible. 

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Wednesday, July 2, 2025

Spectrobes: Origins - Menahat's off-screen scenes and other things #3

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NOTES: Some divergence from the previous chapters. Here's a look into Neal's journal entries. Also, I have no idea how to do the dating system, but since Menahat doesn't have civilisastion anymore, it wouldn't not make sense just to track the days.


Chapter 3

DAY 1

I decided that I wouldn’t do much today. The flight from Wyterra to Menahat was so long and tiring, and the ship broke down on my arrival (which I’ll have to fix at some point). Since then, I’ve just been feeling jet lagged and overall exhausted. I still wanted to check out the Great Desert before settling down, so I used what energy I had left in me to take a quick look. Interestingly, I came across a sort of work camp on my way, and I needed permission to get into the desert from one of the authorities there (which I found annoying…) This whole camp part, I don’t think is so important to me and this project, but I’ve used its location as a good reference point. Its giant gate is now one of my landmarks, being North-West of the Great Desert region.

Thursday, June 19, 2025

Spectrobes: Origins - Menahat's off-screen scenes and other things #1

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NOTES: Here's the first entry of this fanfic, looking at the point of views from every main character that appears on Menahat, except from Rallen & Jeena. I thought this would be interesting. A lot of the ideas I had are written in script-form, so I've tried to convert it into third-person (probably my most challenging writing style). To be honest, I'm not sure if this should all be in third-person, or if I should change between different writing styles to fit certain parts of the narrative better (i.e. third-person, first-person diary/journal entries, script form, etc.). Guess I'll think about it.


Chapter 1


PTCHOOO…

        CRAAAASH!!!


                        Cough..! Cough!

                                        “Ow…”

Neal laid strapped to a broken chair. Everywhere he could feel, there pulsed aches and stings, and for minutes he refused to move in fear that the pain would get worse. The impact must’ve been so strong that he swore he was seeing stars. For a moment, he was even afraid he’d lost his legs since he could hardly feel them. Thankfully, they were both still attached to his body, and thankfully the pain didn’t hurt any more than it did in checking so.

Monday, March 10, 2025

After a day's work

If all day you spend your time hunting for treasure, baking in the heat, the first thing you'll want once it's all over is something cool and relaxing. Second's definitely a, say, "paycheck" worth the week's torment. I won't mind if it's shot down with multiple deductions; anything will do, at this point. I swear, before all these darn exhibitions you could say I was pretty thin. Now that we've been working under Dyrus for some time, I feel as if I've been exercising constantly and I seem to have gained some muscle. Heh heh, wish I could just gaze at myself in the mirror the whole day -- it makes all the trouble seem worth it! Unfortunately our boss is a tough geezer to impress, so even with all that hard work, it'll take us at least a week to earn enough money to treat ourselves. Perhaps when that time comes, we could hit the big city. Eat out for some real meals -- things like steak, pizza, or ramen... Right now, all we can afford are some bland boil-in-bags and a single giant bottle of booze. However, I'll say that -- while it sounds a little pathetic compared to my hopes -- I find the simpler foods and drinks to be enough for a treat. Really! In fact, that's what's going to accompany my brothers and I this very evening.

Since our work for the day is finally over, Zig, Gorrik and I have been given the freedom to spend the evening however we please. Today we've actually managed to look past the pain of our day's labour, so I’m driving us over to the Great Desert once again. You see, that place -- or anywhere on Menahat to say the least -- is difficult for anyone to like. This doesn't come as a surprise to anybody. The days here are tedious and scorching hot. The skies are so clear it basically never rains, and when (or if) it does, it'll never be enough. Either that, or raging sandstorms that'll suffocate you in seconds. Hilariously, the nights freeze you half to death, and you'd be lucky to get even a decent amount of sleep. But despite all that, I think Menahat's vast landscapes are nothing but awe-inspiring! And when are they most marvelous? That time is only a few minutes from now, during its dusk hours, and it hits even better since the weather’s just right. 

Those landscapes... Are they full of life? Diverse? Colourful? Not at all. Suppose you could say nearly every other planet’s landscapes are better to look at, but there's just something that draws me to the ones on Menahat... something about the beauty found in a barren cosmic wasteland. Sure, it was once more than that. Sure, all it is now are dirt, dunes and mesas. But if you come to the cliff and look out across, you'll find yourself entranced by an ocean of desert stretching to the horizon. Floating islands laze about, holding so much sand that it spills off the edges. See all those cliffs, peaks, and boulders -- with the right equipment you can make out their details, enough to sketch them right. And if you're really lucky, you might even find giant ruins peeking out from the ground -- now, THAT would sure please Dyrus. But, it'd be a shame if money was the first thing that came to mind if we saw that. I suppose we should let that idea slide and just enjoy the view. We're on our off hours, after all... just sitting down with our boil-in-bags and our cheap drinks to flush it all down. 

Friday, January 17, 2025

Fancy yourself a treasure hunter too, boy?

A successful find!

Something based off part of an off-screen scene I wrote: https://planetmenahat.blogspot.com/2024/10/off-screen-locked-out.html?m=1

Peering in...

Something I might digitise someday

Drew their mugshots
Their crimes? Attempted traffic cone theft, heckling the cops, and attempted claiming it was apparently all his idea (and in the order of their photos here)

Saturday, December 14, 2024

WIP of 'Vanity'

Yes! I'm finally working on it (https://planetmenahat.blogspot.com/2024/12/comic-script-vanity.html)

This first panel seems chill; they're just doing research for the boss. Beht seems to be the only one interested, though.
I mean, he is canonically interested in ancient history. Maybe he and Neal would get along in this respect, if it weren't for the whole kidnapping scheme xD



Scrapped panel:
I just didn't want to bother with the close perspective of the table objects, I came here to make a quick slice-of-life comic and not to do any studies xd
'm starting to get how to draw Dyrus's damn face. Literally Cyrus without that little goatee he has. I don't even know why he has a pipe, I just feel like he would smoke one.

This is just the start of the scene, the rest of the strip will be set in a different location. But it will be in a similar nature to an old comic I made (2021): https://choccoscomics.blogspot.com/2021/03/gorrik-gets-coffee-spectrobes-fan-comic.html (where it focuses on the actions of one guy at the front while the other two talk behind him)

Thursday, November 21, 2024

Screenshot Redraw - AWESOME! RIGHT?

Basically the scene where everyone thought Neal died because he got launched into the sky and fell headfirst on the sand, where realistically he would suffer a severe concussion and a broken spine, but he survived. Imagine having the powers of a comic relief character.

Man's CRAZY!
Extras below...

Tuesday, October 29, 2024

Dyrus's got an idea.

Y'know, with all the ruins raised in the Great Desert, Dyrus would totally take full advantage of that and turn it into a tourist spot. Assuming he can somehow transform (at least) his work camp into a less unappealing place... 

Wednesday, October 23, 2024

The "huge boulder", huh?

OKAY, everyone has thought this. Who in the right mind would see this and think it's a BOULDER...?

(from this video by Be Humboldt)

I'm no geology expert, but if any ordinary person got told to look for a huge boulder in the middle of a desert, they would probably not try to find this formation.

Also, fun fact:
(from this video by å»‰-Ren-)
I've seen in the Japanese release of Origins that the book Beht references actually mentions that the next ruins entrance is at "a place covered by the hands of a giant rock", which would be a lot easier to get xD

Wednesday, October 9, 2024

I love Menahat...

This is actually the background I drew for the illustration I'm making of Zig, Beht & Gorrik running away from one of the giant desert krawls (and maybe feat. Rallen & Jeena). This background might be a little too "nice" for something more on the comedic side, so I might change it.


Thursday, December 29, 2022

Ramblings in a desert planet

It's all yellow, dust and death, I'll tell you. Yellow, dust and death as far as the eye can see. You don’t even got to be smart to tell - one brother of mine even said it first himself. “This could be the first time I ever thought to associate any shade of yellow with something so grim... bleak... What was the word again?” he asked. And that word was death. Every day since then, that quote of his would replay in my head at least once. Every day it annoyed me, but at least that gave me something to complain about other than the sand. Stuck with our jobs, the only way the boys and I could escape from this hellish landscape is back at base camp. It was also the only place that contained any sort of life that wasn't the occasional cactus. We believe that camp is, by far, the only place with recorded life on the entire planet, and its population doesn't go any further than the Boss and his men. As refreshing as it may sound, especially when you think about the absence of everything that we'd taken for granted in Doldogo and Wyterra, even the camp doesn't hide from this curse of the colour yellow, too. And for what? Camouflage? Ain't nothing lives on this Godforsaken planet - at least, nothing that can kill us. 

It’s only been  half a year since landing here on Menahat and I’m surprised I hadn’t gotten sick of this place sooner. Maybe it was Beht’s strange fascination with the place, as lacking as it is. Maybe it was Gorrik’s almost manic levels of optimism that kept me going. Or, could it possibly be our special treatment from the Boss? But, even so, I know that one of these days, this planet will drive me right out of my skull to the point of no return. Imagine you’re in my shoes. Imagine everything around you is yellow. You see yellow. You touch yellow. You hear yellow, smell yellow, taste yellow… all that is yellow is happening to you constantly. Eventually, you'll get so sick of seeing any shade of the goddamn colour that, even at the glimpse of sweet, sweet gold, you'll want a pistol right in your mouth! And if the pistol so happens to be of the colour golden yellow, fitted nicely inside of a golden yellow box, and placed real low and easy-to-reach on a golden yellow shelf -- what the hell?! - you may as well just keep going. At least, by living on there’s a chance that the last thing you see won’t be any kind of yellow at all!

Tuesday, October 18, 2022

Doodles & sketches from the new sketchbook!

The boys are BACK in my new sketchbook

Beach day with the genderbends, might redraw this with the guys as normal
Zig walking. I did draw the rest of them, but the drawings SUCKED xD
Some Menahat scenery. I would imagine the planet to have some gravity lower than Earth's if the rocks can balance that well. Or something. I have no idea on physics,  but maybe that could be the case... xD