Probably one of Gorrik's limitations in getting the job done

I just had the thought that Gorrik isn't too keen on doing really hurtful things unless he's really convinced that he should, or unless he doesn't reach his full potential. Sure he can knock someone out if asked nicely, but it's just not his kind of thing. However, if he's drunk enough, then he wouldn't have second thoughts -- kind of like that one fight scene in Naruto with Rock Lee.

COMIC SCRIPT: The only girl for millions of miles

NOTES:

• Inspired by this one scene here: https://youtu.be/pNmugxejn_U?t=892
• Also, because this is a script intended for a comic, you'll notice some weird things in there such as mentions of thought clouds
• Also, I just wanted to include my designs for the girls from Menahat in a comic so yeah

EXT - GREAT DESERT - DAY

Sitting on the sand, Rallen and Jeena are taking a break from walking around the desert. Rallen sips a bottle of water and Jeena watches Komainu dig in the sand. Jeena looks a little blue. 

Close by, Neal runs back with a strange notebook. Zig, Beht and Gorrik stalk him from not too far away.

NEAL: Rallen! Jeena! You gotta check out what I just found! It could be an ancient artefact!

RALLEN: Whoa! 

Rallen checks out the notebook in Neal's hands. Jeena remains seated. 

JEENA: Oh y-yeah, that's pretty interesting...!

NEAL: Right?!

Rallen looks back at Jeena.

RALLEN: ... Hold on, Neal. Wait a sec.

NEAL: Okay! I'll be right here, then!

Rallen jogs up to Jeena and sits down with her. 

RALLEN: Hey Jeena, you seem a bit down... (In his thoughts,) Which is incredibly unusual. (Aloud,) What's up?

JEENA: *Sigh* You wouldn't get it.

RALLEN: C'mon, we're partners -- best friends. You can tell me anything. 

JEENA: Okay, well... It's just that, especially since leaving Doldogo, I've been feeling - I dunno - a little lonely.

RALLEN: Lonely?

JEENA: Yeah. I know it doesn't really matter, but... It's kinda weird knowing I've been probably the only girl around for millions of miles. Since then, I've just been reminded of how much I miss some of our friends back at Kollin.

RALLEN: Ohhh... I see. 

NEAL: (Offscreen) WAAAHH!!!

RALLEN: (To Jeena) Hmm, how about once this Menahat stuff is all over, we can head back to Doldogo? We can totally catch up with Salia again, y'know? 

JEENA: I suppose... But it's just... Don't get weird about this, okay? But... *Sigh* I kinda wish you guys were girls.

RALLEN: Oh what?

An imagination cloud, delving into Rallen's mind. He imagines himself and Neal as if they were women, hanging out with Jeena in the desert.

RALLEN: Hm... That's an interesting thought.

A foreign imagination cloud intrudes Rallen's. From that cloud, three shady-looking women - versions of Zig, Beht, and Gorrik - attempt to kidnap Neal. A female version of Dyrus villainously laughs at their success.

GORRIK: Yeah, that IS interesting!

The imagination clouds disappear. Zig, Beht and Gorrik, currently constrain Neal in attempts to kidnap him. 

ZIG: I think they heard ya, you moron!

Ralland and Jeena look at Neal, Zig, Beht and Gorrik.

RALLEN/JEENA: What the--

BEHT: (To Zig) Sheesh, you guys should at least whisper!

ZIG: If yer gonna tell me that, you do it too, goddammit!

Rallen face-palms.

RALLEN: Yeah, why am I not surprised?!

-- Short Aftermath --

Yeah like he's right there

Ordinary moment with Dyrus's henchmen

Ripped the audio from here: https://youtu.be/R45f3WDNbzc

What

I think these guys are basically "we have Team Rocket at home" mixed with "we have TF2 at home"

More WIP stuff

And some things I like that won't be fully shown in the final version xd Yeah, a good chunk of these poses are blocked by the fence, which I'm slightly saddened by, so I may as well share them here xD

RIP Gorrik's mouth xD

Looking at the video WIP, I'm surprisingly not that weirded out to see Zig with Jessie's voice.

Looking at the eldest for the answers (I think it's funny how kind of perplexed Beht looks, despite his entire face being hidden).

Yeah, a lot of his think-I'm-cool-know-it-all expression is missed out on. I specifically referenced one of his gestures in the game, too.

They are confronted after doing a serious crime

I think this is funny because it contains a story in of itself x'D