Eh, boy?

Something dumb I wrote in my notebook. Better off in comic form, or if I could do animations.

Rallen and Jeena marvel at their victory over a Krawl swarm.

SUPERIMPOSE: BATTLE COMPLETE!

Rallen and Jeena see Zig, Beht and Gorrik nearby a giant cactus.

JEENA: Oh look, it's those three again.

RALLEN: Let's go talk to 'em!

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JEENA: Hey, how've you been?

ZIG: Aaargh! Where are they?!

Zig looks at Jeena.

ZIG: Maybe there ain't no ruins buried down here, but we still gotta keep lookin'.

JEENA: Uh-huh?

Zig looks behind him to Beht and Gorrik.

ZIG: Beht! Gorrik! Better kick it up a notch!

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GORRIK: Heya!

RALLEN: Whuddup?

GORRIK: We're looking for the entrance! The big ticket! The way in!

RALLEN: ...And why?

GORRIK: If we don't, the boss is gonna flip his lid! Or clobber us! Or even both!

RALLEN: Your boss will WHAT you guys?!

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JEENA: Hi there. You seem to ha--

BEHT: Well, who do we have here?

JEENA: Rude.

BEHT: Fancy yourself a treasure hunter too, boy?

JEENA: Wait-- Huh?

BEHT: I'd look somewhere else if I were you. There's nothing around here.

Beht stands confidently.

JEENA: ... ... ... Hey, genuis,

Beht looks at Jeena.

JEENA: I hate to break it to you, but I'm not a boy.

Beht stares blankly at Jeena. Then confusion hits him.

BEHT: ... ... ... Hold on. Wait, what? Where's that redhead you were with? 

JEENA: ...

BEHT: That was... Wait right there, girl!

Beht grabs out his script.

BEHT: What does this mean? I... What? This is...

JEENA: Y'know, Rallen's not the only person you'll get to talk to! Just saying.

RALLEN: What was that, Jeena?

Rallen runs up to Jeena.

RALLEN: Oh...! What happened to that guy?!

We see Beht lie down on the ground.

BEHT: (Shakily) ...if I were you. There's nothing around here. Well, who do we have here? Fancy yourself a treasure hunter too, boy? I'd look somewhere else...

RALLEN: Jeena, WHAT did you do to him?!

ZIG: What she do to WHO?! Oh GOD! What's wrong with ya, Beht?!

GORRIK: Ah! Beht! MAN DOWN! MAN DOWN! Oh man, he's freaking out!

ZIG: Ah man, y-ya gotta snap out of it! We can't go on without ya! Hey!

GORRIK:  Oh no! Oh no! Oh no! Oh no!

RALLEN: ...

JEENA: ...

RALLEN: Jeena what happened?

JEENA: We'll discuss this in the ship, later.

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Jeena this, Maja that

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I know she's not canon but still

Random thought about Dyrus Industries

Kind of random, but I just began wondering if Dyrus has ever hired any female workers to work on Menahat, or in anything similar in nature to what the workers we see in the camp do. I mean, Spectrobes is a sci-fi and set in the far, far future, and in the modern (our) world, I've been seeing the number female workers in blue-collar industries increase over the years. So, maybe it's possible that he has. Sure, there's some of Dyrus's dialogue towards Jeena (i.e. calling her a "Planetary Patrol Princess", and telling her she's got "a big mouth for such a little girl"), but he did try to convince both Rallen and Jeena to work for him because he sees quality in both their abilities (albeit, mostly Rallen). Operating on Dyrus's vibes, though: probably unlikely lol.

Spying on Miss Neal

I like to doodle the girls from Menahat from time to time.

Cursed thought, but could she potentially become a manic pixie dream girl

No goggles

I'm gonna assume that Neal needs glasses to see and that his goggles have perscription lenses.

Stuupid

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NOTES: Some divergence from the previous chapters. Here's a look into Neal's journal entries. Also, I have no idea how to do the dating system, but since Menahat doesn't have civilisastion anymore, it wouldn't not make sense just to track the days.

Chapter 3

DAY 1

I decided that I wouldn’t do much today. The flight from Wyterra to Menahat was so long and tiring, and the ship broke down on my arrival (which I’ll have to fix at some point). Since then, I’ve just been feeling jet lagged and overall exhausted. I still wanted to check out the Great Desert before settling down, so I used what energy I had left in me to take a quick look. Interestingly, I came across a sort of work camp on my way, and I needed permission to get into the desert from one of the authorities there (which I found annoying…) This whole camp part, I don’t think is so important to me and this project, but I’ve used its location as a good reference point. Its giant gate is now one of my landmarks, being North-West of the Great Desert region.

Spectrobes: Origins - Menahat's off-screen scenes and other things #2

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NOTES: Third-person is still my weak spot, but I think it's starting to grow on me. Here's my shot at something a little more dialogue-heavy. I like to try to incorporate each character's personality in the way that they speak, too. I feel like it'd be good so, if I just put each bit of dialogue down without indicating who's speaking, it wouldn't be too dificult to imagine who's talking. Anyways, here's chapter two.

Chapter 2

“You want to head into the Great Desert? Will I let you through?”
The man at the gate shook his head firmly,
“Sorry buddy, none shall pass.”

It was incredibly rare for Neal to become disappointed in anything, but he couldn’t help but think to himself, All that walking, and for what?
The plan was supposed to be simple: move from one place to the next, and already, he was only a few steps away from his destination. But then, the one thing obstructing his path, of all things on this desolate planet, was a gateman in a hardhat.

Expressions of Neal

Enthusiasm

Disappointment

Knowledgeability

Confusion, Knowledgeability #2

Disagreement

Agreement

Once again, I have no idea if there's more, but I'll update it as I find anything new

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NOTES: Here's the first entry of this fanfic, looking at the point of views from every main character that appears on Menahat, except from Rallen & Jeena. I thought this would be interesting. A lot of the ideas I had are written in script-form, so I've tried to convert it into third-person (probably my most challenging writing style). To be honest, I'm not sure if this should all be in third-person, or if I should change between different writing styles to fit certain parts of the narrative better (i.e. third-person, first-person diary/journal entries, script form, etc.). Guess I'll think about it.

Chapter 1

PTCHOOO…

        CRAAAASH!!!

                        Cough..! Cough!

                                        “Ow…”

Neal laid strapped to a broken chair. Everywhere he could feel, there pulsed aches and stings, and for minutes he refused to move in fear that the pain would get worse. The impact must’ve been so strong that he swore he was seeing stars. For a moment, he was even afraid he’d lost his legs since he could hardly feel them. Thankfully, they were both still attached to his body, and thankfully the pain didn’t hurt any more than it did in checking so.

Peep

What're they looking at?

Flippin' tha birdie

Look at these wannabe bad guys

More database crap

Their database portraits are now on the internet :D

I have no idea what use this will have for me, but whatever

You know what?

When I do digital illustrations of these guys, I think I should stop being lazy and actually draw that retro-looking groovy patten on the yellow parts of their outfits

It's now June 2025

Ways to Accidentally kill the boss #1

JADO: Show yourselves, measly humans!

Hiding behind a building. Everyone hides behind Gorrik.

DYRUS: Who in the world is that?!

BEHT: We don't know, boss. Maybe you should make a business proposition?

While it may *seem* like I've been inactive

I actually have not. I'm just too lazy to take pictures of my drawings.

Also, I've been in the middle of writing a fanfic which is basically the whole Menahat chapter again, but from the perspectives of everyone that isn't Rallen & Jeena xD

And I've been trying to translate their in-game dialogues to Tagalog as part of my attempt to actually try to learn the language.

That's it xd

How Beht lost his job

Beht is still behind in the number of posts he has compared to the other two, so here's a story on how he lost his job
(Okay I guess this one doesn't really count since Zig's tagged here, too)

So, Beht mentioned at one point that he lost a job before working for Dyrus. Key word: "lost". I imagined this scenario:

He's driving a truck full of oil or something. And that giant tube thing holding the oil says in GIANT writing, "FLAMMABLE CONTENTS. DO NOT SMOKE WITHIN 50FT OF VEHICLE". 

So one day, Beht decided, "Screw it. To hell with it." and he smoked, which was the dumbest decision anyone could make. And then, I don't know how it works, but something definitely caught fire and everything went downhill from there. 

Thankfully there were no casualties, given that Beht was the only one at the scene. He tried to lie to the authorities by saying, "Some idiot decided to smoke here and ran off." which quickly got dismissed because they got a hold of his phone and showed him the text message he sent to a group chat between him, Zig and Gorrik containing a selfie of him in front of a fire saying, "I think I made a mistake" and Zig replying, "BEHT YOU MORON", "DID YOU SMOKE AGAIN", "I TOLD YOU TO QUIT THAT SHIT A YEAR AGO AND LOOK WHAT HAPPENED", and then Gorrik freaking out. 

And so, Beht got fired from his job, guaranteed to decrease his hireability to near zero.

Incorrect Quotes #6

Zig [SURNAME], Beht [SURNAME] and Gorrik [SURNAME] -- Personal Assistants Private Henchmen Errand Boys Bums -- Dyrus's remarks: There's a saying amongst the officers: If a job's worth doing, it's worth doing well. If it's not worth doing, give it to those three. They ache for responsibility but constantly fail to complete set tasks. Astoundingly incompetent. Possibly orphaned.  Probably have more teeth than brain cells collectively. Promotion prospects: comical.

Source: Red Dwarf, obviously altered to suit the characters a little more

With D(C)yrus's DS sprites: (here)

Hanging out with the boss

Funnily, I've made up some stuff about Dyrus, too. For instance, he's got a few secrets -- that he's extremely arachnophobic, and that he has a collection of soap-opera box sets, for instance. Also, I have no idea how Zig, Beht & Gorrik even make it into his private property, despite (likely) being heavily monitered by cameras and security guards.

Anyways, some sitcom-y kind of doodles

Humidity just does that

So, I'm at the Philippines to help mum with her high school reunion stuff, and I've forgotten how much the heat here is different from Australian summers. It's more humid so you feel all sticky, and it gets awkward to stand up from a faux leather couch while wearing short-ish shorts, haha.

Dyrus ordered him to get rid of that tarantula
(or Kaio's equivalent, since the animals are probably different there)

Gave Dyrus some severe arachnophobia to punish him a little. And to give him some more humanity, especially since I like to make the three invade his private life sometimes (so, headcanons like this should come naturally). Also, this may be a little out-of-character for Zig to gently carry a tarantula with his hands, but I just thought it would be a little funnier this way. Maybe he's just trying to act tough.

Zig is a bit particular when it comes to loyalty

Also, I have another unfinished doodle of the bros intruding Dyrus's marathon of a soap opera, where there's an intimate scene on TV causing Zig, Beht & Gorrik to freak out, covering each other's eyes, so Dyrus screams at them, "GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!" I hope to get to finishing that someday because I think the delivery is hilarious xD

Neal but not Neal

I dunno what exactly, but liked the vibes of this one enough to post it

Fired

There's a funny scenario in my head where after they get fired, they feel so lost. They stumble across Neal and he teaches them about the wonders of a boss-less life. They enjoy it for a while, but suddenly they stop functioning and claim to need to work under a terrible boss. And so they try to get back to Dyrus, who coincidentally is looking for disposable pawns because his existing workers are too useful, and so they all end up back together x'D
 

Typical henchman stuff

Telling Neal to take them to the ruins, or else…

(All this happened off-screen, but I do wish there were cutscenes for this plot point xD)

Interrogating the poor explorer

(featuring da boss)

AU with free roaming Spectrobes

Neal’s gone exploring with the bros and is actually not being threatened in this scenario. (Unfortunately for Zig & Gorrik, all the nerd stuff comes first)

Something more slice-of-life-y

A bit different from the more action-adventure/humorous sort of tone I’m used to doodling. Zig is definitely going to use this information not for bad-guy purposes at all xD

Jeena in the trio’s outfits

Personally, I like the look she has with goggles on.

Also, she and Beht share the same know-it-all pose — that being the reason I drew her like that xD

Madame D.

IDK I just felt like seeing how I should make R63 Dyrus look like xd I wanted her to give off the same vibes as (how I draw) Dyrus himself.

But... Why? Who on Earth would want to see this? ... ... ... ... ...C'est moi :P

Look at this evil filthy capitalist lady! She's eeevil!!!

Also, screw perspective, these are just dumb doodles

First Disguise

Unassuming valley girls, that's the disguise x'D

Based off this: 

They're kinda killin' it, not gonna lie

Dedication to the boss is everything

Tea break at a tea shop

Stereotypical henchmen stuff

I hope to put them into more disguises in the future xD